Friday, 19 October 2012

My Narrative Writhing

It was a  dark cloudy day  when Ben took a walk to the shops.
Ben bought same chips and then waited for his order. Then took
a walk around the block. He saw some of his friends.

Boys were talking Bens lunch hey he said  you are taking my lunch .
But the boys jumped ben and took  him into a corner  the boys said .
ben was trapped  and calling for help but onone came ben started to

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