Kawau camp

 A complex sentence has more than one clause. It has added detail giving the reader more information. It adds interest and makes writing JUICY.

For  our third event,Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach, which helped me through  the confidence course.

Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course up high in camp bentzon.

It was my first time, I was nervous about sailing on camp.

I was nervous about sailing, because I was solo on camp.

I was nervous about sailing on camp. but I think I can do it.

Its was the first time that, We went abseiling.

We went abseiling but I was scared.

The Whisper

P1 On Avenel Station there was a cow called Rosie  she was walking on the paddock.When she heard a whisper HELP,HELP ME Rosie turned around , but there  was no one there.She kept walking,Rosie heard it again HELP , ANYBODY.

P2 The mysterious voice faded away Rosie was getting scared,Then she called “Hello is anyone there”.On one called back then she ran to get help but they were gone,She found her friend Anna.She said to Anna “can you help me theres a whisper and it sounds like  she needs help”.

P3 Anna and Rosie ran as fast as they can lookin all around the forest but they couldn't find her.Anna saw someone hey look ,there she is she was heart, what's your name my name is Kelly I was walking then a deer was chasing me , then I fell and cut me self.

P4  There was a thorn stuck inside hold on to something Anna pulled the thorn.It came out ,Kelly was still in alot a pane its going to be allright said Rosie. “Thanks you guys for helping me” said Kelly It's all right  said Anna and Rosie.

  

The Accident my story with marking

Last night it was raining hard like  golf balls coming down, me and my friend Zane had a sleepover  at my house.The next day my mum made us some breakfast, mince on toast humm nice breakfast.Jo and Zane did the dishes after that me and Zane  went out to get the quad bike out.

Riding up and down the hills.I was going to turn that’s when I FLIPPED and fell over Zane ran as fast as he could to tell Jos mum. Jos mum called the ambulance, when mum was done she rushed to try and get the bike off.

The ambulance came and they tried there best to get him off “PUSH” they said but they couldn’t get it off.So they call the fire department, they keeped pushing there hardiest to when the fire department came they got the bike off.

Jo had to go hulstpatill  had got a broken leg and dislocated his arm.When Jo came out of the hulstpatill  he was banned from the bike

from now on.  

Being a Rousie

Frozen in the ice

Last night it was snowing Layla went find fresh grass to eat. Layla looked for grass for 1 hour but she couldn't find any. Soon after she fell asleep next to a  shed.

When she woke up she was cold and freezing, Layla was scared that she would die.  She was yelling  with fear but none could hear her. Trying to get out but she couldn't find a way out she tried to keep herself  warm by moving her legs up and down.

She heard a dog barking and the other cows MOOing the dog found her. Kent went back to the farm and tell the farmer the Layla’s stack.

The farmer found Layla but he couldn't find a way to get her out. Then he got the tractor to pull her out. The farmer was happy that Layla got out she could have died if he didn't come.

Ana get shorn

 In the middle of spring, Ana and her two friends  Kate and Sarah were  grazing on the grass.“Humm I  love eating the grass” said Sarah . “Im so full of eat that much grass”.  

But one day Ana  saw the dogs on the four wheeler, “I love chasing those dumb sheep” said Trent. “I know them they are here to chases us” said Ana

“Ready set go” said Frank, “RUN,RUN” said Ana. Barking away the dogs kept chasing the sheep. Up and down the hills  running as fast as the sheep could run. “Oh no they're going to get us  HU,HU  Im getting tied” said Kate.

“What's going to happen to us?” said Sarah “don't worry you just get all you wool off, but don't kick or there will nick you” Ana said.”Thank goodness there going to take my wool off I’m hot”.

“Ok time for me know bye see you soon” Ana said. So the man took Ana and she happy that she's getting shaved.

NE,NE,NE,NE,NE,NE,NE goes the shaver Ana staining come.

“Thank goodness all of my wool got taken off me I was hot”  said Kate. Ana and her two friends ran around jumping with joy.

This is my dairy farmer Plus ,Minus ,Interesting

This is my movie about the three little pigs

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The Boy Who cried Wolf

 My score here 

My Androcles and the lion movie

This movie is a Aesop story his lesson was if you are kind to others and they will be kind back.
This is my movie about being kind.

The Cross Country run

Paragraph about: ready to go

Its a Sunny day for Pt England, The Cross Country. We had to line up to go into our years and wait  to have some fun outside.

Paragraph about: The start line

We were feeling happy because the year fives were first . Then it went on and on until it was our turn. Miss  Jarman lead us to the start line I was very nervous, Mr Burt told us the way.Once he was done Mr Burt said “Are you ready”, we all said “Yes”, set, Go. We were off around the cones and through gate and out the to the reserve.

Paragraph about:Finish line

When I was almost at the finish line I fell over but the man picked me up and said “keep going” so I did.

Conclusion that makes my message clear

I was so happy that it was over because i was tired of running. overall it was fun to compete in the Cross Country.

MY VIDEO

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This is my story about The Three little pigs

The Three little pigs

Once upon a time , there were three little pigs that said ‘Good bye’ to their mum

and set off on their own.

The first little pig went and bought hay for the house.  It was built quickly, and easy to build .

After the bad wolf came and said ”Little Pig, Little Pig let me in”, but the pig said” not by the hairs of my chinny,chin, chin” ‘If you don't let me in I will huff and I’ll puff and I’ll blow your house down’. So he huffed and  puffed and blew the house down. Then the big bad wolf chased the pig until he finally  ATE HM.

The second little pig thought she was a little bit smarter than  the first one. So went and bought some sticks for her  house. It was built a little bit faster and easier. But the one thing that is not right is its too weak .

The pig herd sniffing and ran inside, knook, knook “whos there?” said the pig. ‘Its me your mum just see how you are doing living on your own.” But the pig looked out the window she saw the big bad wolf and said “ I know its you wolf”. “Then let me in. No? Ok then I will huff and puff and I’ll blow your house down”. And he did, and ate the third little pig up.

The last little pig was smarter then all of them so he decided to make his house out of bricks. So he got them and started to make it, it was not easy to build. Finally he finished and had a break.

Soon after the big bad wolf came and said “ LITTLE PIG ,LITTLE PIG LET ME CoME IN”. But the pig said “ NOT BY THE HAIRS OF MY CHINNY,CHIN,CHIN”.

The big bad wolf said ”if you don’t I will huff and puff and I’ll blow your house down”. So he huffed and puffed and he did not blow the house down, “I need a new plan he said”.

So he climbed onto the roof and said “LITTLE PIG I'M COMING TO EAT YOU”.

He climbed into the chimney and got ready to go down then the pig got a pot of hot water under the chimney.

Then he dropped down and landed into the hot pot and fell with a CRASH and a SPLASH. That was the end of the big bad wolf . So the pig lived happily ever after in his cool brick house.

Sentence Mashup

1.She is in great form because  every week she goes to the gym.

2.She goes to the gym every weekend and is in great form.

1.I can't talk to you because I do not have time now

2.I do not have enough  time so I can't talk to you

1.We did not leave the  umbrella at home, so we are glad.

2.We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella at home

1.We did not leave the  umbrella at home, so we are glad.

2.We are glad that we did not leave our umbrella at home

My Antarctica movie

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This is my movie about a Killer whale killing a Penguin

My Maori work sheet

these are my Maori colours in the rainbow.

Whero - Red 

Karaka - Orange 

Kowhai - Yellow

Kakariki - Green 

Kiorangi - Blue

Poroporo - purple

My Weekend

On Saturday I went to my  game against Waitakere, I play for Marist Tamaki rugby club.

I was on for the first half of the game. Our caption Frankie won the toss and we picked receiving and going left. Then we got to our places and the back line were on the left and the forwards were on the right. The ref said are you ready? We said yes then he blowed the wrls then the kickoff began.

The ball came to my side but Lorenzo got it then he ran to the people. And got tackled then I came and plowed over and started up the ruck lucky we saved it so we got the ball. But Frankie knocked it forward so we had to go back 10 there fastest player ran up an got a try, Rob are coach said to  get in there.

The kicker got the goal kick in so we went back to play Jaybers always kicks to the left for us to takil. Then we went up to the number 9 we tackled him.  The halfback parts it out to the win and ran to Max but Max was by himself and he go parts and got another try.

Add detail in the middle sentences

Children in rooms 16 to 18  had to stay inside at lunchtime on Friday

All the year 5 and 6 children were lucky to have their own netbooks.

My empty tummy is making me hungry and it is rumbling.

The fields are gooby and muddy outside

Learning my time tables is really good it is important.

This is the best writing i did today

 At Pt England we are very luckily because all the 5/6 children have their own netbook.

All through the year at Pt England school it has been raining and  the fields get muddy outside.

Venn Diagram about Hercules planes

I have been leaning about Hercules planes and that is how they get to Antarctica.

Red and Yellow

Detail in Sentences

WALT  Add  detail in the middle of sentences.

Mr Burt, who is the principle of our school, loves to take assemblies on Fridays.

Mr Burt takes assemblies, so we learn the new korero every  Friday.

Lots of people from other countries visit Auckland City in New Zealand.

My reading about Seals

My goals in writing

When I write paragraphs I am learning to use clever  vocabulary to say what I mean.

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Antarctic Animals

Do you know how Antarctic Animals survive in the cold?

They have big thick layers, of blaba or fat to keep them warm.

In Antarctica there are predators such as the killer whale , Leopard seals and the Weddell seal. They hunt things like krill , others seals and fish.

In the winter there are two Animals that stay in the holy of winter. They are the weddell seal and the emperor Penguin that stay in the holy of winter.

My Parallelogram

A Parallelogram is when there are 7 shapes. Thesis in clod shapes like 5 triangles , 1 square and 1 parallelograms. Today I  made a house then I1 had to colour it in then  put it all togater to make a house.     

My witting about Whales

Did you know that Antarctic whales are not  fish?They are mammals that can be found in oceans all over the world.

Do you know what is a group of whales is called a pod? The male whale is called a bull,  a female is called a cow but the baby whale is called a calf. 3

Did you know that whales have big mouths and long gorbonos? They also have thick layers of blubber to keep them warm when the water gets cold. 4

Some whales have teeth but the other ones are called baleen whales. But the other whales have peg liked teeth and some don’t have any teeth at all.3

My witting about Antarctic Penguins

W.A.L.T su

Penguins in Antarctica live in the southern oceans at the bottom of antarctica. But they don't live in the North of the word.  

 

Did you know that penguins can’t fly? When they come ashore they stand up straight and take little short steps.

In antarctica the sun doesn't rise  until summer.All the time there are gales  and the temperature drops to freezing.   

In antarctica the emperor penguins are the one of  few animals that can survive in the pack ice.

When it is cold in antarctica the penguins have a thick layer under their skin, its  called blubber it  keeps them warm during  cold blizzards.

When the penguins get  cold they have thick layers of feathers.

It can overlap the first layer to make it waterproof so they don’t freeze to death

My quiz about Seals

William comes to our school

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Yesterday someone famous  came to our school it was Will.i am.And he came to donate 100.000.000 dollars for the maniakarlane schools. So we can become scientists , engineers and mathematicians.But when he was talking he inspired me to became a drummer and a singer.

working out by Korobeau

All about Antarctic Seals

WALT We are learning to summarise the main points of a paragraph.

Seals are mammals that live in oceans all over the world.All of the seals at antarctica are non - eared. These seals have lots of blubber to keep them warm.

Seals have thick short hair on their street lined body to keep them warm.

They have flippers to help be superb swimmers.

most of the time seals are in the sea.

Seals are fast and graceful in the sea but on land they are slow and clumsy. They haul themselves when they want to have a rest. But when they want to they lay some pups.

Most of the common seals are crab eaters there are 30 million of them. And they eat krill.

Did you know that leopard  seals can’t move fast on land. So penguins are not afraid of them but under water they are very afraid seals.

When  winter comes in Antarctica the only seals that can take the. Coldness of winter

is the Wendell seal but the other seals are gone to find another place to stay.  

Air pressure

I made a graft about the air pressure of Antarctica. This shows you how good the air to
berth in.

Oamru Creek Movie

Nga Manawa

Mangroves

Getting ready for FIAFIA

This Year something great is happening it is the 60th Anniversary of our school, and there is going to be a  Fiafia celebration. It will be on the 18th of April and the stage

will be outside.

I am in the Bollywood group. I like it because I get to

experience another culture. I will be wearing  black jeans and white t - shirt my favorite thing is doing Indian dance moves.  My tutors are Miss Lal and Miss Khan

Korobeau Omaru creek test on Color

Testing Omaru Creek for - Color

I am going to find out:  What color the water is.

I am going to test this by: comparing different water samples and desseriding the color.

Resources and equipment: 4 water samples culvert ,  bridge , sea and tap.

I predict that: at the culvert I think the water is dirty and the bridge water is also dirty.

I think this because:when we went eling I saw the was green looking.

Results of my tests

Sea Water	Salty
Tap water	Clear
Omaru Creek water by culvert	Murky
Omaru Creek water by bridge	Green and transparent

My conclusion (what I found out): I found out that Omaru creek and

the sea water was clear an clean.

Why I think this is: Because I looked at the water and the sea aand creek water was clean and transparent.

Korobeau Omaru creek test on Turbidity

Testing Omaru Creek for - Turbidity

I am going to find out: How clear is omaru creek water is.

I am going to test this by: We are going to test the water  by getting water samples.

Resources and equipment: we need to get samples  of culvert water , bridge water seawater and tap water  and different font sizes.

I predict that: I predict that the culvert water will be the dirtiest  of them all.

I think this because: I think this because I looke at the water and it looked yukesults of my tests

Sea Water	9
Tap water	9
Omaru Creek water by culvert	9
Omaru Creek water by bridge	24

My conclusion (what I found out): I found out that the Culvert was not the dirtiest it was the bridge.

Why I think this is: because the catfish is digging into the dirt and making it cloudy